I believe what you posted was very logical.
But, think on this, what if you were to write
a killer title? I am not saying your content is not good., however suppose you added
a title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean HC-WORKS BBS is a little
vanilla. You should look at Yahoo's home page and note how they create
article headlines to get people interested. You might add a related video or a related picture or two to
get readers interested about everything've got to
say. Just my opinion, it would bring your posts a little livelier.