I believe what you composed was very reasonable. But,
think about this, what if you were to write a killer title?
I ain't suggesting your information is not good., but what if you added something to possibly get people's attention?
I mean HC-WORKS BBS is kinda boring. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and see how they
write post headlines to grab people to open the links.
You might add a video or a picture or two to get readers interested
about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier.