I think that what you wrote made a bunch of sense.
However, think about this, suppose you typed a catchier title?
I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your
blog, however what if you added a title to possibly get people's attention? I
mean HC-WORKS BBS is kinda vanilla. You ought to look at
Yahoo's front page and watch how they create article headlines to get viewers interested.
You might try adding a video or a pic or two to get readers interested about what you've written. Just my
opinion, it could bring your blog a little livelier.